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@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ Safety
 
 The Los Alamos M'Atom Bombs have been playing against other teams since early 2012.
 
-100% of the two games we have played against Clovis have resulted in a serious injury
+100% of the two games they have played against Clovis have resulted in a serious injury
 (requiring long-term medical attention and resulting in a roster reduction at future games).
 
-0% of the dozens of games we have played against every other team
+0% of the dozens of games they have played against every other team
 (at least 8 teams) have resulted in a serious injury.
 
 I had previously refused to NSO any game with the player named Big Red
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ and decision to support your fans bad-mouthing us,
 combine to me feel completely justified
 in not officiating any more games with Clovis.
 
-My life is too short to waste it on dealing with nasty people.
+My life is too short to waste time dealing with nasty people.
 If you are a Clovis skater feeling embarrassed by the actions of a few team-mates,
 you need to decide how many boycotts you're willing to let them bring upon the team.
 I will probably not be the only official to do this.