From 8f7b93ed2e4c02edd5f16e5df02a013a0ce136f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Neale Pickett Date: Mon, 22 Jul 2013 00:20:31 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] fix more pronouns --- papers/dcpd.mdwn | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/papers/dcpd.mdwn b/papers/dcpd.mdwn index 0a1f456..d2a49bf 100644 --- a/papers/dcpd.mdwn +++ b/papers/dcpd.mdwn @@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ Safety The Los Alamos M'Atom Bombs have been playing against other teams since early 2012. -100% of the two games we have played against Clovis have resulted in a serious injury +100% of the two games they have played against Clovis have resulted in a serious injury (requiring long-term medical attention and resulting in a roster reduction at future games). -0% of the dozens of games we have played against every other team +0% of the dozens of games they have played against every other team (at least 8 teams) have resulted in a serious injury. I had previously refused to NSO any game with the player named Big Red @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ and decision to support your fans bad-mouthing us, combine to me feel completely justified in not officiating any more games with Clovis. -My life is too short to waste it on dealing with nasty people. +My life is too short to waste time dealing with nasty people. If you are a Clovis skater feeling embarrassed by the actions of a few team-mates, you need to decide how many boycotts you're willing to let them bring upon the team. I will probably not be the only official to do this.