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@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ front of him. ``I've been waiting almost an hour.''
``Well sorry kid,'' Bavarious responded as he trudged to
his desk chair, ``I've just about had enough people for
today.'' The kid stared at him unblinking. He was probably
thirteen or fourteen. ``Mr. Bavarious? I need to speak with
thirteen or fourteen. ``Mr.\ Bavarious? I need to speak with
you about an important matter. Don't you think it's a
little funny that a kid like me is here to see you? Let me
introduce myself, I'm Oscar Crowley.'' While the kid was

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@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
Norma's Diner is a horrible place to get a cup of joe. The only
reason I was there was to meet a mysterious client that had
insisted on anonymity. He had reached me twice by phone in the past
three weeks and only identified himself as Mr. M. I told him that I
would only take the case if we met face to face. Mr. M contacted me
three weeks and only identified himself as Mr.\ M. I told him that I
would only take the case if we met face to face. Mr.\ M contacted me
again this morning by text message to say that we should meet here
at Norma's at 10:30 sharp.
@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ without knowing the client, and I don't like to wait.
The waitress pours me another cup of swill as I look over my notes
on Mr. M's case. He says he is being stalked and that threatening
on Mr.\ M's case. He says he is being stalked and that threatening
messages are being sent to his e-mail and voice mail. He hints at
the fact that some people are trying to blackmail him. He even
casually ponders whether his life may be in danger. Its really not
@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ voice that was not at all sheepish or meek:
``Detective Bavarious, Mr. M wont be joining you today.'' he said in
a calm, controlled voice. ``In fact, I doubt that Mr. M will be
``Detective Bavarious, Mr.\ M wont be joining you today.'' he said in
a calm, controlled voice. ``In fact, I doubt that Mr.\ M will be
contacting you again at all.'' This statement chilled me to my bones
and instinctively I lowered one hand under the table to the Beretta
clipped to my belt.
@ -136,14 +136,14 @@ I was all ears.
``You see, Det. Bavarious, Mr. M was being harassed, stalked and
``You see, Det. Bavarious, Mr.\ M was being harassed, stalked and
blackmailed. and I am the one who was doing these things to him.''
The kid's voice was deeper now, and I must admit that he commanded
my attention as few others could.
``I targeted Mr. M for the crimes that he has committed against
``I targeted Mr.\ M for the crimes that he has committed against
children. He is a child molester and a murderer and I wish to see
him imprisoned for these crimes{\ldots}''
@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ of his chair and grabbed his book bag.
``Oh{\ldots} and Mr. M's real name is Michael Wilkinson. He is a biology
``Oh{\ldots} and Mr.\ M's real name is Michael Wilkinson. He is a biology
teacher at Washington Junior High School. When you give the cops
the disc, just tell them that it was given to you by another PI
that knew who your client is.''

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@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ writing like a pro. His teacher told him his writing could make
James Joyce and Shakespeare spew jealous tears from their eye
ducts. Bin's fellow students quaked in awe whenever he gave
one of his weekly readings, weekly readings that had been insisted
upon by the principal, Mr. Howard. Mr. Howard hoped the other
upon by the principal, Mr.\ Howard. Mr.\ Howard hoped the other
students would learn something from Bin. So far, all they learned
was fear. And jealousy.

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@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ a blank expression. ``You brought your gun?'' Tim asked.
``Come here boys,'' he said loudly ``Mr. Luke is going to show you how
``Come here boys,'' he said loudly ``Mr.\ Luke is going to show you how
to shoot.''

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@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ the courage to speak.
``Mr. Slender, why'd you go after those children?''
``Mr.\ Slender, why'd you go after those children?''
I asked, trying to sound as calm as possible.

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@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ in person? No? Could you put that down Bic pen already? You know
the clicking, and all. I get skittish, too. Honestly it's
alright.
You {\em do} seem horribly tense. I am not, let me assure you, Mr. Ehl
You {\em do} seem horribly tense. I am not, let me assure you, Mr.\ Ehl
Bee. There is no need to go all star struck on me. I am as much of
a nobody as you are, probably more of a nobody.
@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ fucking profile.
I don't even fucking care. You think I haven't told
this story? Who {\em told} you this story? Was it Luke? Mr. Ehl
this story? Who {\em told} you this story? Was it Luke? Mr.\ Ehl
Bee, Mr.\ Writing-under-a-Pseudonym-to-be-artsy-Biddick, with his
prodigious talent and his intense, {\em fucking} eyebrows that he
probably picks like a bitch? Was it? It wasn't. It was me. I

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@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ glass.
``Mr. Bavarious?'' he said.
``Mr.\ Bavarious?'' he said.
``That's what it says on the door, kid.'' He looked
like he was about 12.

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@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ gut. He didn't so much as flinch.
``I know what she said,'' he said. ``She said I was
harsh. That I abused them.'' He grimaced horribly and his eye
teeth erected into fangs. ``But she never understood. You have
to be tough to live in a city like this, Mr. Bavarious. I only
to be tough to live in a city like this, Mr.\ Bavarious. I only
wanted to make my little girls tough.'' The world was fading,
purple splotches exploding in my vision. ``Amy will show you
what I mean.'' The girl hissed, drawing her lips back from

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@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ heard a voice from a hidden loudspeaker.
``Well well Mr. Landon. I see you're awake. I hope you
``Well well Mr.\ Landon. I see you're awake. I hope you
like your surroundings, you'll be here for some
time.''
@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ speaker started again:
``Don't worry Mr. Landon, your headache shall soon pass.
``Don't worry Mr.\ Landon, your headache shall soon pass.
Your kind heals quickly, even in your cocoon state. I can see
you're confused. All shall become clear shortly.''
@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ here{\ldots}
``Mr. Bravarious, I can just barely hear you through the speaker.
``Mr.\ Bravarious, I can just barely hear you through the speaker.
Why don't you come down and talk to me through the bars?
I'd like to talk man to man anyway.''
@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ who I was dealing with.
``Mr. Bravarious, why did you take me here? Is this a joke? If
``Mr.\ Bravarious, why did you take me here? Is this a joke? If
it is, I'll keep it between just us guys, you got me good.
Just let me go.''
@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ voice.
``I can tell that you're scared Mr. Landon, but that
``I can tell that you're scared Mr.\ Landon, but that
fear too will pass, as you emerge from your cocoon.''
@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ thing?''
``Not exactly, Mr. Landon. You are one of an ancient race. A
``Not exactly, Mr.\ Landon. You are one of an ancient race. A
race that has hunted humans for millennia. A predator that acts
like a parasite. Your kind leave its offspring in the form of a
human for humans to raise. When that offspring reaches adulthood,
@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ the right chord.
``It was a simple matter of checking the records at an
orphanage where the last of your kind was known to feed. You had
certain{\ldots} traits. I confirmed these traits by watching you
for the last two weeks. There is no uncertainty Mr. Landon, you are
for the last two weeks. There is no uncertainty Mr.\ Landon, you are
the monster I was assigned to capture.''
@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ spoke again before I could ask.
``Now Mr. Landon I have other duties to attend here. I must
``Now Mr.\ Landon I have other duties to attend here. I must
assume you'll be alright.''
@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ flowed anew. I had an idea.
``Mr. Bravarious, I haven't turned into one of these
``Mr.\ Bravarious, I haven't turned into one of these
monsters yet. That means I'm still human. I'm human and
I'm hurt, and I might die of thirst. Please just give me some
water and some bandages before you go.''
@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ I heard footsteps, and crept beside the doorway.
``Mr. Landon, I am leaving your supplies beside the
``Mr.\ Landon, I am leaving your supplies beside the
do-``

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@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ little Johnny.
begin to tear with his inevitable realization.
``Tommy and I are doing our science fair project, remember? He
was testing the effects of his mother's pills on Mr. Johnson.
was testing the effects of his mother's pills on Mr.\ Johnson.
We ground it up in his orange juice.''
``But{\ldots}what{\ldots}about{\ldots}''
@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ hopeless.
The unmistakable sound of a dentist drill could be heard in the
background.
``Yes, Mr. Bavarious. Part.''
``Yes, Mr.\ Bavarious. Part.''
Bavarious wept uncontrollably.

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@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ said.
``Do tell, Luke.'' Brad leaned in, interested.
``Yes, Mr. Bavarious. I love your stories!'' Hooksey exclaimed,
``Yes, Mr.\ Bavarious. I love your stories!'' Hooksey exclaimed,
excitedly.

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@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ who could it be?
``But that's not true Mr. Bavarius, killing can bring back
``But that's not true Mr.\ Bavarius, killing can bring back
your son, because I can help you.'' Luke saw a man he had
never seen before that looked like he was 50 years old with gray
hair and balding. His sweater smelled of blood. ``Luke, I know

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@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ to save.
``You have to help our friend, Mr. Bavarious!'' the kids
``You have to help our friend, Mr.\ Bavarious!'' the kids
had said. ``She's been kidnapped by some freaky
cult!'' The cops didn't believe them. Neither did their
parents. But I did. I knew the dangers of not listening to kids. My

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@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ any.
``Mr. Barvarious'' she repeated, still saying it wrong,
``Mr.\ Barvarious'' she repeated, still saying it wrong,
``I suppose I can admit you to a psychologist but I cannot do
further for now.''

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@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ happier supper table.
At first Mr. Boswell would turn it around and around, so that the
At first Mr.\ Boswell would turn it around and around, so that the
lamplight flashed off its blade hypnotically. Then, holding the
handle lightly between his thumb and all four fingers, as one would
hold the bow of a cello, he would run that knife's dainty little
@ -25,13 +25,13 @@ teeth slowly up and down the length of his forearm, occasionally
pausing to turn tight little circles over the network of veins
decorating the inside of his wrist and displaying to all the
precarious restraint in which his very life's blood was held.
Martin had used his father's butter knife once when Mr. Boswell was
Martin had used his father's butter knife once when Mr.\ Boswell was
at work; from that day forth, seeing his father's shivers never
failed to provoke an answering shiver in himself.
Then Mr. Boswell would turn the butter knife's attentions to his
Then Mr.\ Boswell would turn the butter knife's attentions to his
scarred, scabbed hands, those stained and stinking hands which had
fired the little gun that shot Martin's mother in the back as she
tried to run for the last time. He would drag those hateful smiling
@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ to abrade and swell and eventually bleed.
At first the wound was a minor one. But after being kept open by
Mr. Boswell's nightly ritual for the better part of a year it began
Mr.\ Boswell's nightly ritual for the better part of a year it began
to grow wider and deeper. His flesh became purple and black and the
stench of putrefaction was so strong that no one would willingly go
near Mr. Boswell except for Luke Bavarious, a former police
near Mr.\ Boswell except for Luke Bavarious, a former police
detective turned bodyguard, and Martin.
@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ promise I'll hurry.''
Martin threw on a clean set of clothes and dashed back downstairs.
His father never even looked at him as he took his seat as quietly
as he left it. Mr. Boswell did not shift his attention from the
as he left it. Mr.\ Boswell did not shift his attention from the
butter knife until Bavarious walked into the dining room, claiming
to have seen an intruder across the courtyard. Martin was
immediately ordered to his bedroom for the night, and as he left
@ -82,10 +82,10 @@ before.
That night taught Martin that while Mr. Boswell was watching his
That night taught Martin that while Mr.\ Boswell was watching his
butter knife, he could go anywhere and do anything without his
father seeing him. Only Luke Bavarious could keep him from leaving
during those times. One night, as Mr. Boswell sat mesmerized by the
during those times. One night, as Mr.\ Boswell sat mesmerized by the
clean red blood that seeped from his corrupted flesh, Martin went
to the linen closet and pulled out a backpack in which he'd stashed
clothing, food and a little money. Bavarious met him at the
@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ too, as soon as he sees that I want to leave.''
After looking at Martin for a moment, Luke said, ``I know, kid.
After what he did to your Mom, I knew that I'd only leave this
house when I was dead. Mr. Boswell, he'd kill me in a second if he
house when I was dead. Mr.\ Boswell, he'd kill me in a second if he
knew I was standing here talking to you and not killing you. No way
can I let you stay here. Your father doesn't love or respect you.
But he was a good man once, and I can't bear to live with having